Holy fuck, didn't know you rapped too. You've got flow, rhyme, and time. Great voice and serious talent, just need a beat.
Holy fuck, didn't know you rapped too. You've got flow, rhyme, and time. Great voice and serious talent, just need a beat.
Thanks man. :) And yes, that I do. Seems like... maybe... you have some of those?
This is something I can get down to. Even have some old school mau5 vibes. BUT on the technical side of things, there's much needed improvement. Need to balance out the mix because it sounds like the main synths aren't getting their full sound out and are being over compressed. It also drowns out the drums too.
So work on getting your mixing skills down and then mastering so you can really bring clarity and quality into your stuff my man.
yep this is a result of a really quick and shitty production session with Troteos and me. Thats why it sounds so over-compressed. But thank you for your feedback :)
You've got a nice voice my guy, I feel like it could be mixed in better though to really bring it out. Also in 1:06 the melody could of changed to match the melody of your voice when you changed the verse, would help keep it more fresh ya know? Nice job either way, dig them subtle guitar scratches with the synth.
Thanks, Bagels, your response means a lot! :)
Put me at ease the second it entered my ears, fantastic work
Yup way better
Thank u
Bass reminds me of Hermitude. WHERES THE ALBUM THOOO MAN!?
Sorry for the long wait. I'm uploading the rest as soon as possible. But if you want to listen to them now I've posted all of them on my Youtube channel, Fantastic Log. Hope you like it!
Better mixing is all you need to make it a step closer to excellent
Have you seen this version, friend?
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/731941
Very nice chill beats and synth, but its very bland in variety. Play around with the notes more and give it some life. Also I think the synth should of came in earlier to hook the listener in more.
Thank you for the feedback DoctaBGL. I Have listened to what you have reviewed and in my 2 latest songs [Oceanic Breeze and Fight of the finals]. I Tried to add more life! Please review them aswell!
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